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I'm To You

by =EveFromLove

I'm to you


When you reach until me,

Go beyond of my appearance,

Ignore my philosophy...

Forget everything I am to world;

Because today I'm with you.

Thus close your eyes ...

To feel the atmosphere in the air;

Feel my smell and  touch my hair.

What is invisible for eyes,

It's sensitive to body...

It's sensitive to touch...

Tasting our more bestial memory.

Therefore...

When you reach until me,

Be aware of a thing...

Today...

I'm with you!
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What is invisible for eyes,

It's sensitive to body...
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~chazzyluvergurl Mar 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Wonderfully done! :) It's very simple and to the point, but there is elegance in your words - and genuine feeling. I think it's the truth and sincerity behind them that gives them the power they hold.

I really love these lines: "To feel the atmosphere in the air; Feel my smell and touch my hair." It's very light and airy, and the tone is so free; it feels like a cool spring breeze to me.

I also really love "Tasting our more bestial memory." It's a unique way of wording it; I think it's gorgeous.

All in all, it's very balanced and has a good flow, a good vibe that makes me happy. :) Well done!

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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Mar 3, 2012  Professional Writer
I get glad by you have enjoyed...in fact...I write to persons like you...that possess maturity to understand a message.

Thank you very much!!!

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~chazzyluvergurl Mar 3, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome! :) I really enjoy reading and looking deeply into literature. I always love when someone shares that passion. ^^

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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Mar 4, 2012  Professional Writer
:hug:

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~angrywinters Feb 27, 2012  New member Professional Writer
This sounds like it was written in the eyes and said through the touch of mind. Beautiful.

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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Feb 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Woww
It's exactly that.

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~angrywinters Feb 28, 2012  New member Professional Writer
Yay, good to know I still have some understanding of sensuality and passion.
Thank you for sharing this with me.

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Mood: Suggestive =EveFromLove Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Boy...
You understand everything!

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~angrywinters Feb 29, 2012  New member Professional Writer
Lol, I still feel there is much to learn,. but thank you.

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That's wonderful, great job.
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