I'm To You
by =EveFromLoveI'm to you
When you reach until me,
Go beyond of my appearance,
Ignore my philosophy...
Forget everything I am to world;
Because today I'm with you.
Thus close your eyes ...
To feel the atmosphere in the air;
Feel my smell and touch my hair.
What is invisible for eyes,
It's sensitive to body...
It's sensitive to touch...
Tasting our more bestial memory.
Therefore...
When you reach until me,
Be aware of a thing...
Today...
I'm with you!

















I really love these lines: "To feel the atmosphere in the air; Feel my smell and touch my hair." It's very light and airy, and the tone is so free; it feels like a cool spring breeze to me.
I also really love "Tasting our more bestial memory." It's a unique way of wording it; I think it's gorgeous.
All in all, it's very balanced and has a good flow, a good vibe that makes me happy.
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ChazzyLuverGurl Whoompah WhiteLadyDragon...VALENTINESHIPPING TRIO OF TERROR
~Loves Davey Havok too much~
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Thank you very much!!!
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ChazzyLuverGurl Whoompah WhiteLadyDragon...VALENTINESHIPPING TRIO OF TERROR
~Loves Davey Havok too much~
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"Faith lies in the way of sin..."-Billy Corgan of the Smashing Pumpkins
It's exactly that.
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Thank you for sharing this with me.
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"Faith lies in the way of sin..."-Billy Corgan of the Smashing Pumpkins
You understand everything!
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"Faith lies in the way of sin..."-Billy Corgan of the Smashing Pumpkins